SILENCE..................
SILENCE IS EASY,
BUT DIFFICULT TO DEAL WITH..
EASY TO DEPEND ON,
BUT CRAZY ENOUGH TO INITIATE..
BEAUTIFUL TO LOOK AT,
BUT A STRETCH TO AN EPITOMICAL APPOCALYPSE..
POCKETED CONVINIENTLY,
BUT HIDDEN HIDEAOUSLY..
MAKES U SANE,
MAKES U INSANE..
ANONYMOUSLY FAMOUS,
JOBLESSLY VIOLENT..
NEEDS TO BE SEARCHED,
HAPPILY ISOLATED..
FLICKING ONE,
AND DABBING THE OTHER..
THUS,
SILENCE FOR SOME,
CRIME FOR ANOTHER!!!!!!!!!!!!
(self-written)
posted by Anjalika at 9:40 PM
22 Comments:
silence is such a contradicting thing.. there are situations in life when we will be in a dilemma as to remain silent or break it..
hey your poems are growing incredible day by day... nice.. keep it up.
when silence speaks in your life, it heeds well to listen.
Silence - Something I always learnt to live with n now people complain
- I would add -
'Revenge is best served when cold' n that I guess happens when you're silent towards ur enemy.. Am I right?
The best line in the poem was - Makes u Sane, makes u insane..
You are too good at poems.. keep posted n stay connected.
TO ALL THE BLOGGERS,COMMENTIN.....
i was a newcomer then,when i started bloggin and,as reserved and as shy as i am,took time in exposin my true talent of writin good stuff...
but gradually i'm tryin to break the shell..all the credit goes to u bloggers who take out time in readin my stuff and placin ur comments..must say,i'm impressed!!
honestly speakin,u bloggers have actually helped me overcome the situation that i was livin in wich was equally tormentin my poor lil heart...
i'm soon startin with another blog wich will feature my work of photography and self made graffiti images...nthin gr8 bout bout them,as it is i'm not all that good...lol,but they express a lot and i guess that shud be more important to us than the perfectionism...
once again,i thnk to all the bloggers who r apprecitin my stuff..thnk u!!
@jithu...
thats the reason,"the contradictory one",i wrote this poem,and not only that i tried to show both sides of silence(the negative and the positive outcome) within the two lines of a stanza...
@rash...
i agree...
hows ur school goin?
@prasoon...
revenge...i found the tru meainin of it after readin the book,"count of monte cristo" by dumas...
and wat are my views bout it..i guess the followin extract will say it all,
"wud u allow the snake to sting thee twice"-shylock frm mercahnt of venice(shakespere)...
if someone slaps me,i'll give him double...thats wat Ram did to Ravan,thats wat Krishna did to Kansa ,thats wat pandavas did to kauravas..if not the indian history,then wat did usa do when attacked on 9/11..did they turn their other cheek,as christanity tells... na,they took revenge...but revenge shud be sensibly and with plannin and shall not be done on petty things,but only when it has actually done shit to u,massively...
i think i have bored u enough with a long shit lecture...sry for consumin so much of ur time...
thnx for likn my poems,cn't be btr without ur comments and my love for readin and music..
First.....I wanna comment on that pic...Awesome...just fabulous
I so wanna sketch something like that
Amazing TripleSix!!
now lemme read the poem :)
Silence speaks louder that words...
So very truly...
MAKES U SANE,
MAKES U INSANE..
I go insane when the person I want to talk to stays silent..n then I cook up all stupid things on why s/he not tlaking to me :(
One more goodie from triplesix...Pretty kewl!!
...n' i doubt not...that it's so difficult for you!!
p.s. what was the air thing you mentioned at mirage's??...just wonderin....
@strangersinc...
finally someone hasn't got choked ...jus kiddin!!!thnx for the comments..and the thing that i wrote on mirage's...hmmm...did u predict smthin of that sort,cos i thought u wud nvr chk it...chaloo,good u did...i just felt like pullin ur leg,jus bcos u made me upset,and i know it was not with an intention,but i was disappointed...
@arz000n...
i like that pic too,i picked it up frm deviantart.com once again..thats my fav art site...did u chk it,i gave u the site..
i go insane,when someone makes wrong use of silence...no wonder i wrote:
"flickin one,
and dabbing the other..
thus,
silence for some,
crime for another.."
thnx for droppin by,mr funny man...
ur posts really make me laugh...good job..u know its hard to do that...cheers!!
silence is aomething which is cherished at times, and anathema at others. the wise mind strives to identify those instants and behave accordingly. but the bad thing is that nobody is wise.
"It is in silence, that we hear the silent..." Rt?!
Cool poem niks, and u knw what I downloaded the same pic a few days back...really speaks volumes, that picture, and yet its so silent!
@mirage...
"peace is finished and had no use..but now,silence is wat i strive for."
u know why i picked up that pic,its bcos of the above line wich is a self written one...
she is tired of attainin peace..but now she's goin for the ultimate silence...
@poison...
ur absolutely right..and so does my poem echoe the same perspectives..
i thought u wud nvr comment,thinkin that u felt bad bout wat i wrote as a reply to ur comment on the muse...
thnx for droppin by....
i dont take offence easily. bring it on any day.
silence -- the best of frnds or the worst of enemies
well depends...
i guess
nice piece as always
n even better the lines u said tht why u selected the pic
"peace is finished and had no use..but now,silence is wat i strive for."
finally someone hasn't got choked
sarcasm...huh?...sarcasm.....but i liked it!!
thnx for the comments
..yeah you better(wink!)
and the thing that i wrote on mirage's...hmmm...did u predict smthin of that sort,cos i thought u wud nvr chk it
..n' i always end up checkin up things which i'm not meant to!!
i just felt like pullin ur leg
if only you had pulled both my legs....for it doesn't look nice to have one leg longer than the other!!!
jus bcos u made me upset
..did i??
and i know it was not with an intention
...oh no...that was purely intentional...n' thoroughly cold blooded...for i love to break hearts of young girls!!!!!...specially of those who are into journalism!
but i was disappointed...
...but they say...they who can disappoint you....are actually the ones who can really make you happy!!!!
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@poison...
good,i like to keep things in that way..good to hear that frm u..
@dhruv...
yeah..it depends until and unless u know wat the outcome wud be..
thnx for appreciatin my poem and that line...
@strangersinc...
hmmmm....seems like we r bringin bout another cold war...lol
i liked they way u responded to my "choked" comment and.."sarcasm" comment by u..
i liked it too..lol
"end up chkin up things wich i am not meant to"...so sad :(..i must confess,i sympathise with u.. :)
i guess pullin one of ur leg has made it difficult for u to walk...so if we meet,i'll make sure to pull the other leg..
yeah...u did make me upset and u btr be sry for it and thats the reason y i didn't make any comments to ur recent post..but i might do it for the nxt..dn't wry,its time for u to get choked again..hahahahaha
"i got choked." wat was that ha!!wasn't that upsettin....(double wink)
u like breakin hearts that too young girls doin journalism....how mean...
koi na...i'll keep that written in my newspaper...
it was fun to read ur present comment... it actually made me laugh..
nice... .. .
@MS....
thnx...
Makes u sane
Makes u insane
beautiful piece
*Loud Applause* So the sixes are crossing the boundary lines regularly. Great. Keep it up.
And yeah, would be interested to see that graffiti art of yours. I too, sometimes dwell on creative art. :)
@manjari..
thnx a lot..
@khelnayek...
"applause"...i'm really overwhelmed by that thought of urs...thnk u so much for that..
oh yeah...i'm already feelin gr8 in seein ur curosities to go through my graffiti sketch..
btw, i have been absolutely waiting for you to start posting your pics and graffiti stuff online. good on you for doing that.
@rash..
yeah,i'm waitin for the right time actually..but they r not all that gr8,but i wud be delighted to receive criticisms too..in that way,i'll know the status of my art,so called"graffiti art"...
thnx for showin interest..
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