Monday, August 22, 2005

ANGEL....NO MORE!!


HUNT FOR THEM,
HUNT NOW....
SEARCH FOR THEM,
SEARCH NOW....

FOR I FLAPP MY WINGS,
AND SET MYSELF FOR ANOTHER QUEST..

BUT THEN,
I STOP!!!
FOR I SEE,
ANOTHER STARE!!!!!!!!

(self-written)

15 Comments:

Blogger Arz000n said...

Awesome!!
Self written haan...

Way to kewl :)

Btw, was tht painting made by you too?
Just curious...

Take care...n Greetz!!

6:38 AM  
Blogger D'yer Mak'er said...

reminded me those doves.... that were killed once..but the blood....it never stopped for it dropped forever....

8:05 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

@arz000n...
hey thnx for that g8 compliment...
yup,its original,but not the paintin,but i confess that i have good taste for art cos i'm obssesed with graffiti art and have passion for photography...anyhow,thnx for droppin by...u2 tc

@strangers'inc....
hey,i'm thrilled and amazed to see ur comment...thnx for droppin by
well,i like ur statement...tells me smthin,wat if the doves wished to be phoenix for once...wat if u and i wished for smthin that we desired...wud the wrld come to an end...or shall we say,that it has bcome too selfih to fulfill a lil desire...the reason i say that is cos God's desires are fulfilled and goes on for another 24/7,or maybe more than that...but for someone like us,not a fraction of sec is spared...wat an injustice done to the creation of God's..heights of infidelity twds them.
wat a pain to see the blood of that human being oozin out...wat a pain to see someone's innocence stripped off...wat a pain..wat a pain."
whose statement shud i endorse with:
wordsworth's,"what has man made of man", or
t.s.eliot's,"o weariness of men who turn frm god,
to the grandeur of ur mind and the glory of ur action,
to arts and inventions and enterprises......."

11:12 AM  
Blogger Random said...

now that is a fantastic poem.

2:08 PM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

hey....thnx
i'm still awake.all thnx to my course...had to file up a story for the press conference i had attended..now i'm fucked up,tremendously...chal,i'm bout to sleep...time for vivladi again...
gud nite!!

2:33 PM  
Blogger desperado said...

beautiful piece
but doesnt everyone stare at heroine
so why does it stop u??

9:24 PM  
Blogger Mirage said...

No one's looking hny!! Coz believe me NO ONE cares!! They're all too busy looking at themselves!! Relax ok!? Btw, well written! :)

10:12 PM  
Blogger manjari said...

How about telling them,"i damn you all who sit and stare i damn you all who let me stay in my despair."
take care

11:51 PM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

@dhruv....
cos they r lookin at smthin thats not for real..and still amke it look beutiful,but here its like phonies lookin at u and insultin u...and even if u are an ok lookin...they make u feel ugly with urself...even if i dn't care,it hurts

@manjari..
babes...its like even if u dn't want the summer,the heat will still dehydrate u,whether u want it or not....i'm still tryin to avoid those shitty moments,but its hard...cn't run away frm it...

@mirage...
can u stop the mirror reflecting ur image....can u???

10:19 AM  
Blogger khelnayak said...

Hey...nice poem! and is it coz of that that the blog title is Girl Interrupted. :)

Why would one stop at a mere stare?

And yeah....ur writing skills justify u being into journalism. Keep it up!

10:19 PM  
Blogger Jithu said...

666, intersting piece.. :-)

3:49 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

@khalnayek....
shud i be scared of u....bachaooo!!!
jus kiddin. :)
well,i call my self "girl,interrupted",cos i remember this thing written which justifies not only the story of the film, but my preceptions too,
"sometimes the only way to stay sane is to go a lil crazy."
and i believe in it,thus i even say that i'm a juxtapose of every "me's" in the world...
thnx for appreciatin my poem and my writing skill...but the credit goes incomplete without anyone's comments...or else how wud i know widout the feedback...
thnx for droppin by...

@jithu....
thnx a lot...it means a lot to me...but wat took u so long!!!

8:05 AM  
Blogger Prasoon said...

Fly ! Dont stop!
Sky is the limit but u need not stop there too, one can surely go higher than that.

don't look back towards the world - everyone will keep staring.. yahi iss duniya ne seekha hai - nazar lagana

nicely written :)

12:04 PM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

@prasoon...
thnx once again..
i rem this dialogue frm a film..."yeh duniya bhagwan ne banayee hai...lekin isme kaise jina hai,yeh samaj seekha ta hai."[joggers park]

11:41 PM  
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9:48 AM  

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