Monday, January 23, 2006

WHAT'S THE POINT??

head on the table,
facing the cell.
eyes are waiting,
ears are stranded for a bell..

i go out alone,
looking for someone.
i go back home,
waiting for no one..

happiness accompanies me,
till i unlock the door.
dissappointment attacks me,
seeing my reflection on the floor..

i place my bag on the chair.
i walk through the room.

the stereo is on.
the coffee is done.

no one around,
but i'm happy.
no one to talk to,
makes me deliriously happy..

i delude my own thoughts,
and pander over it.
i denude my self-being,
debauchery treates me relentlessly..

SICK!!
i get sick of it.

i walk out,
and grab a breadth..

something belongs to me,
but nothing comes.
standing in the balcony,
eyes are wondering around..

head held high,
watch the clouds go by.
the sunlight begins to fade,
the night starts to invade..

thoughts are capsulated,
suffocated and defeated..

it's been fenced,
by doubts and intents..

head on the table,
facing the cell again.
eyes are still waiting,
ears are standed for a bell.................

30 Comments:

Blogger Harashita R. R. Bajaj said...

nice poem...
yeah worst thing in this world is to be alone...hav u read The Zahir...as Pouo Coelho says its better to be hungry then to b alone...theres a joy in sharing...its better to buy one burger n share it when u cann buy two rather than havin one alone.

11:52 PM  
Blogger Harashita R. R. Bajaj said...

by the way wheres the happy jumpy triplesix whos blog was full of fun...hope u r fine

11:53 PM  
Blogger Rohit Talwar said...

you know what.. the one thing i love the most about your lines always--is that they are unusual--i mean in their pattern.. simple and refuse to follow a pattern. Nice!

Take care. =)

8:04 AM  
Blogger Rohit Talwar said...

uufff..

just take the words from my blog.. and use them only once n form a story out of those. read again on my blog, n u will know. i dont believe u havent understood the bloody tag!

8:16 AM  
Blogger Rohit Talwar said...

uufff..

just take the words from my blog.. and use them only once n form a story out of those. read again on my blog, n u will know. i dont believe u havent understood the bloody tag!

8:16 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

ROHIT..
u know,i was a lil upset,bout not receivin many comments...but after readin ur's,i understood..there are things tht shudn't be commented at all to..but there are comments like ur's tht can make a person feel more encouraged to do btr work,n not relyin on the no of comments...
tht's the most beautiful comment by u dat i have ever received so far for the stuff tht i write..
thnk u

HARASHITA R.R BAJAJ...
hey,thnks for droppin by...
but in the manner tht u have written seems like we have met,or i know u..or vice versa...i'm clueless..
i havn't read tht book..but i'll surely do..thnks for the suggestion on tht one..
u r right...but to an extent it's good to be lonely...u get to know more bout ur self...tht's upto u,whether u wanna utilise tht loneliness into smthin constructive or go insane..
have u seen Zinda?
initially,sanjay goes insane,but later he uses tht time to learn how to fight back....now tht wud be smthin constructive..though it's more twds the destruction..
same is the case with Edmond Dantes frm "count of monte cristo"..
but then u cn't allow the snake to sting u anthr time...so in this case..revenge is objectively constructive..
anthr example..is Virginia Woolf!!
do u need any other?hahaha

i dn't know if i ever was tht happy jumpy...prbbly,my retardness got u betrayed,if u happen to see me face to face,cos most of my ramblings are pretty distressin..
lol!!!
hahahahaahheheeheh
:)

8:26 AM  
Blogger Rohit Talwar said...

thanks! i never knew i wrote comments so well :)

*just kidding*


aaah.. so u knew to & jerry thing about Simon & Garfunkel... awesome. even i was wondering, why wouldnt you know! we have the same taste in music.. phir bhi!!

i just updated n saw your comment. when r u going to do the tag now?

2:46 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

ROHIT..
hahahaha
the tag thing....
gimme three more days...got this project on my head...
till tht time u complete the tag tht i'm gonna thrust on u..
jot down 6 of ur fav books n write a lil summary on it...
now get goin...rohit
hahahahha
:)

5:39 AM  
Blogger Arz000n said...

Nice poem as always...

Ya..I would like to ask the same Q which Harashita is asking

?????

6:15 AM  
Blogger Arz000n said...

Why you hafta be so evil all the time....and tag me in your new post ???

You dont like to see me happy, smiling and enjoying a tag-less life??

:((


Hehhe...

6:26 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

ARZ000N...
arey,nthin hap to me..i'm good
see,wat can u do if u have to throw up...u wud throw up...same here,i jst got everythin oozed on a ppr...or comp screen
anyways,thnks..

oh the tag...hehehahaha
I'M THE KILLJOY..
:)

6:34 AM  
Blogger MS said...

Hi,

Nice poetic verse that...Yeah I know how it feels when somebody moves away from your life abruptly, leaving U deserted... :(
That was my way of looking @ your poem....but I feel yours is another perspective, wherein you are actually waiting 4 n expecting somebody to enter into your life...

I am reminded of this song which is coming up @ the top of my mind now..."Teraa Intezaar hai..."

Hey, BTW first time 2 your place (Again directed here thru Arz000n's blog....Boy, I must admit this guy has a huge fan following :-)) N hope 2 keep frequenting this place in the future too... :D

Cheers!!
MS

8:38 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

MS...
well,i'm not really sure what i want...this pretty lil mind of mine keeps on diverting or gets stagnant on irrelevant things...
thnks for droppin by...
i'm not arz000n's fan...i jst like readin his stuff....cos they have an element of humour in them,wich is hard to find in most of the blogs...
keep visitin..i wud be really delighted to see ur comments..
take care

10:31 AM  
Blogger Prmod Bafna said...

Great poetry with a good lyrical undertone.. lyircal grief perhaps.. :)

12:15 AM  
Blogger transience said...

cool use of that piccy. i should drop by more often, see your next installations. :)

and thanks for dropping by my space.

12:30 AM  
Blogger milo said...

beautiful lines frm a beautiful person whos mood swings r real intersetin;-)
n nw wait fr d day wen we all dropby at ur place n hav a gr8 time together wid sm red wine..wat say?

4:33 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

MILO..
u r my dear frnd...n i know whenever i'm upset...u guys are there for me..u,bhajji,netz n megha..thnks for being there..
n yes,i'm lookin fwd to ur visit to my place again...

XFREAKX..
well,tht's wat it is...
things ooze out without ur consent n realisation..
watsay?
thnks for droppin by?

TRANSIENCE..
hey,nice to see a comment frm u...thnks..
keep visiting...
btw,u write really good..
thoughts collide at times...

9:48 AM  
Blogger MS said...

really nice,really melancholy.

10:07 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

MS..
thnks

10:17 AM  
Blogger Prmod Bafna said...

Things sure do vent out when crammed for sometime!! but u must have a lyrical structure to your mind! cos when things come out of my head they're often.. disheveled lol :)

1:03 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

XFREAKX..
if i have been asked to stitch a wound,i woould stitch them properly,so tht no wounds are left open to be consumed by pain tht might remian stgnant,perpetually..
this is the ans to ur comment on y my poems arn't disheveled..

wud u ever laugh at a poor joke??

tht's it...tht's y the feelings tht i throw up turn out to be immaculate,as i wud try to make it look like..only bcos

when i wud read them all..i wud have a good joke to laugh at..not smthin tht i need to question myself on an anthr question...

confusion is nthin..but can make u

BROKE
DELIRIOUS
MIND NUMBING

7:29 AM  
Blogger camera shy said...

i love this photo

"i denude my self-being,"

this line in particular
resonated with me

and still is

3:51 PM  
Blogger Prmod Bafna said...

Hmmmm that is one thing i nevr thought of!!!! well if i were to realate bad events as such i wud prolly write it in the "usual" sad way...!! Now u gimme the secret to avoiding unpleasant memories hehe.. Rock on!

11:46 PM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

XFREAKX..
there u r..
thnks!!

3:16 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

BLOG THIS..

same here...
n i dn't give time to wonder around as to y does it happen...
hahaha

glad u cud drop in...
take care

3:21 AM  
Blogger The man in the box said...

nice...may I suggest a poem tangentially related...http://bloodhead.blogspot.com/2005/04/alive-for-moment.html

About that tag, I didnt see any such post on your page...so I'll wait for you to do it first! :P

3:40 AM  
Blogger The man in the box said...

the link in the above post!

3:42 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

MAN IN THE BOX..

i chked it..
i liked it..

take care

8:17 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

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8:17 AM  
Blogger Gates said...

Even I stay alone, and loved the poem.

12:12 AM  

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