LOVE ME NO MORE
LOVE IS THICK,
BUT SERIES OF LOVE IS DYING...
HISTORY REPEATS,
FUTURE IS FORETOLD,
BUT PRESENT......
PRESENT IS THE BITCH OF ALL TIMES!!!!
THE LIVING IS DEAD,
THE DEAD IS HAUNTING..
MEMORY FADES,
BUT THE PAIN.....
THE PAIN LIVES ON!!!!!
APOCALYPTIC STATURE IS BULIDING,
BUT CONSTRUCTIVENESS.....
IS GETTIN DIVIDED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WHATEVER MIDAS TOUCHED,
TURNED INTO GOLD..
BUT WHAT I TOUCH,
BECOMES A STONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOVE IS THICK,
OH LOVE IS SO THICK,
SO THICK....
THAT ITS DEATH,
HAS THICKENED MY IMPACT...
THE IMPACT OF BEING NO MORE LOVED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
13 Comments:
tats a gud one anji .. but afraid it brings out wrong emotions .. hey, is the pic also ur creation? frankly, i liked the pic more :p
there was once this old temple....a solitary one...the temple of Persephoneia by the sea...all marooned...all alone...marked only by dull sunsets...n' attended by an old blind priest...but one day...the entire destiny of the temple changed.....when a little boy came inside seekin for refuge...all in tears...do you know why the destiny of the temple actually changed?...because whole of his solitary life...he seeked for souls for company...for support........for just a few moments.......n' whole of his life ..he forgot...that he can actually be that company for a few lost souls....their support...he can actually fill those vacant spaces.
trust me if you can...lovin someone is even more precious than bein loved!
p.s. the fact that this comment board always gets filled up.....to me...it's directin to only one way!...people write it out of love......n' only out of love....people that actually love your posts...people that actually love you!...people that will always love you...whether YOU want 'em or not!
Not sure about love, but my brain for sure is veeeeeeeeeeeery thick ;-)
PUNEET...
wrong emotions?
gr8 expectations......
no..i didn't sketch this one...
DYER MAKER...
i know there r so many ppl around me who love me,thts the reason y i love bloggin...but somehow i feel there's smthin missin,n thts only bcos of my inacapabilities...
unknowingly,i mistakenly cause pain to others,n its drastic impact is on me...
btw,i liked the story....but maybe,i'm the boy lookin for someone..?????
MR MEDIOCRE..
lol
gr8 brain...i hope it dsn't explode..??
B OOOO OOOO M
I see someone possesses similar feelings as I do... hmmmm....
ZE EXAGERATTOR..
yeah...right,with few exceptions...
"sad eyes follow me,
but i still believe there's
something left for me.
so plez come stay with me,
cos i still believe,
there's smthin left for u n me..
u n me..."
well,dn't start scartchin ur head...the above lines are the concludin part of the song"one last breath"....CREED
present is the bitch of all times!!
loved it.
oh quite a lot of you is left ..dont worry...
and ur writings....as always only one word ..excellent
and the pic was awesome
listening to Creed can sometimes be too much on the mind...especially on my poor little mind :)..but still i like them
the colour and the size of font made the post all the more interesting
I am unsure of what the exceptions are.. I see the similarities though..
oh and I take an overview of the text from bottom to top before I read anything...
so... I knew it was sumtn by creed hence I didn't scratch my head
:P
ROHIT...
thnks for droppin by....
tht line frm my poem is a fact n will persist for long..
DESPARADO..
thnks for tht lil note of appreciation n the overall description of my post,wich has made my poem look bigger thn least expected...thnk u
creed...yeah,they r good...good enough to be consumed when nthin else is done...
ppl like creed,puddle of mud,linkin park..at times dn't leave u with any option..
ZE EXAGERRATOR..
how far do i feel good to see ppl sharin the same similarities...i dn't know,but i felt relaxed knowin u didn't scratch ur head,else tht wud have given me some doubts...
jst kiddin!!!!
DESPARADO..
tht thank u is for u,not for the band...i forgot to put a full stop after the word"thnk u"...
hey great pic as usual & nice poem .
U seem to write abt love these dayzz .. but it reflected some pain as well.
a nice one .
whtevr it is .. jst remember .. 2006 is for smiles only.
ANUJ..
hmmmm....???
love's a bitch...oops,isn't there a film(spanish),with this title..lol
thnks for appreciatin my writin...n for the advice,will surely help my imbalanced head...let's see wat 2006 has in store for me
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