Thursday, December 29, 2005

STRANGE REMAINS


LISTENING TO "PEOPLE ARE STRANGE",
WHILE MY TEARS GO IN FOR A DRAINAGE..

REMAINS OF THE DAY,
I COLLECT THEM AND THEN LAY & LAY & LAY...

UGLY HANDS,
BEAUTIFUL TOUCH.
SWIM THROUGH MY HAIR,
IN DISGUST..

THEY GAZE AT ME,
I GAZE AT THEM.
THEY SPIT AT ME,
I TAKE THEM ALL WITH ME...

BULLET THROUGH HIS HEAD,
BLOOD OOZING OUT OF ME.
TEARS OUT OF HER EYES,
PAIN SUCKED INTO ME...

FEELINGS ARE POISONED,
THAT SURROUND ME.
TORMENTS GET SOILED,
IMBEDDED HERE WITH ME!!!!!!

THE SONG IS STILL ON,
"PEOPLE ARE STRANGE"......

OR IS IT THE TRUTH,
TALKIN TO ME???

18 Comments:

Blogger Shy said...

hi just dropped by at ur blog !! nice..

shy

7:14 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

SHY...
thnks

7:59 AM  
Blogger Rohit Talwar said...

ok. i wish you keep having boring times at CCD!

You write really well.

well.. this talks vividly oh how you (i'm guessing) felt that time. time out. freeze. chillax. new year's up, here's hoping the best and coolest time around for you.

:)

6:49 AM  
Blogger Arz000n said...

Whts up with tht BIG FONT ??

Hmmm...

You sure are a mystry gal to me TripleSix :)

Lemme read the post now..

8:04 AM  
Blogger Arz000n said...

BULLET THROUGH HIS HEAD,
BLOOD OOZING OUT OF ME.
TEARS OUT OF HER EYES,
PAIN SUCKED INTO ME...


I think you only can come up soemthing like this...you are the female version of Quentin Tarantino to me, ma insane-poem writer :)

Chillax and greetings for New Year.

Have fun and take care....if anything, dont forget to trouble Mirage..yeah you can trouble me too :D

Greetz!!

8:06 AM  
Blogger desperado said...

Doors playin ...this song is really cool.

"For the music is your special friend"
chalo..now smile n relax and welcome the New Year

Have bright n happy new year

8:28 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

ROHIT...
lol....
sure i will force borin into my routine....it's 24/7,no wonder the poetry,music n books,n watchin films esp the foreign ones...
all the credit goes to the boredom...oh,i foegot...photography n art as well..
lol
2006 shud be interestin for me...dat's wat i'm assumin..let's see

ARZOON..
"kill the bill"....lol
tht font,i'm sure u liked it...didn't u?

those lines...the bullet one...well i was at CCD,n was extremely bored...finished readin bio of stanley kubrick,orederd for ma black cof,but it wasn't there on my table...didn't have anythin constructive to do...

till the time my coffee arrived,i requested for this song on tht juke box.."bullets" by creed,n got hold of this ppr napkin,n started jottin down some lines....
tht bullet song infused n inspired me...n thus those lines....
sometimes..music can do wonders...

bout troublin u..i think i do tht all the time...through my posts..lol
hpy new yr 2u2 n take care

DESPARADO..
jim morisson was another gr8 poet...how can one forget tht...if creed's song"bullet" was an inspiration to a stanza,then jim is the sole source of inspiartion to the whole poem...
"when the music is over..
turn off the lights,
turn off the lights"

hpy new yr 2u2
have fun

9:10 AM  
Blogger Mirage said...

Have faith girl...its not so bad as u think. We had fun last nite didnt we? Try and remember those good times too honey, coz theyre so many of them!

Please take care of urself. oh n happy new year! :)

3:24 AM  
Blogger Rohit Talwar said...

hey.. chillax. 2006 is going to be great for you. He does what He plans, and i am sure He has planned something extremely exciting for this year.

Jus believe that everything's going to be nice and stuff will fall into place eventually.

8:53 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

MIRAGE...
thnks...but wat fun we had at ur place...thnk u for the gr8 evenin..

ROHIT..
yeah,sure i will...let's see,wat's in store for us..
:)
hpy new yr

1:12 PM  
Blogger Sushmit said...

hi 666...! been a bit!
pretty torrid and emotive poem...what's up?

11:01 PM  
Blogger !xobile said...

yeh gaane logo ke dimaag pe kya kya effect daalte hai! ache bhi aur bure bhi...

6:15 AM  
Blogger anuj said...

things will subside...once u stop givin them importance...
kich their a**,whoever or whatever troubles u...

thts wht u said to me .. so dear jst take it into consideration here as well.

jst keep smilin.

and great pic again.

7:07 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

SUSHMIT..
wat's up?...an ugly mountain to climb on...but i'll still climb,cos thts wat i like to do n write bout the climb,instead of the trip n the destination...

ANUJ..
lol....i dn't why i did tht.."lol"

ZE EXAGG...
no comments on tht one,cos it's only a song of inspiration to me...bad or good...helpless on judgin tht one,but it did a good jod ob my writtin..lol

8:50 AM  
Blogger the Monk said...

whoa...that was some poem...

9:48 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

THE MONK...
thnks...

10:02 AM  
Blogger Naiad said...

i think i love the sketch.

10:33 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

NAIAD..
thnks
and once again thnk u for droppin by..
:)

12:11 PM  

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