Monday, January 02, 2006

LONG...GONE...THE SIREN CASCADE


ANGER IS DESIRING,
NICE IS THREATENING..
TO ME!! TO ME!! TO ME!!

"YES,FOR YOU!!"

FRUSTRATION IS BRIMMING,
CHOPPED...CHOPPED...CHOPPED!!
CHOPPED MY ALARMING WATERFALL..

BUT THE SCISSOR RUNS THROUGH,
THROUGH THE BLACK ENVIOUS FALL..

SKETCHING A FACELESS WOMAN,
BUT COLOURS RUN DRY..
MAKING A BEAUTIFUL PORTRAIT,
BUT CONSCIOUS IS YELLING AT ME..

FACING THE MIRROR,
I TALK!!!!!

TALKING TO LONELINESS INSIDE ME,
WITH A DISRUPTED MOUNTAIN,
RESTING ON TOP OF ME..

IT IS REMINDING ME,
OF MY PRETTY DAYS,
THAT ABUSED ME,
FOR LONG!!!

NOW THERE IS ONLY DARKNESS...
DARKNESS AND PEACE!!

AND I'M BACK ONCE AGAIN,
FACIN THE MIRROR.

I TALK ONCE AGAIN,
TO THE LONELINESS INSIDE ME..

"BUT WITH A SMILE!"



(this poem may sound a lil strange to u all...but it deals with smthin tht a person inside me ended up doin when the "frustration brimmed" to the extent of lettin tht person's frustration flow before it beomes unstopable n uncontrolable for her,by choppin off her most beautiful assest..so i let it all flow n thus the poem...lol )

16 Comments:

Blogger Rohit Talwar said...

good. atleast you let it out. thats the best thing to do.

:)

11:35 AM  
Blogger Jithu said...

frustration ho ya kuch bhi, its a very good piece of work. liked it and yeah the pics are great!

1:31 PM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

ROHIT..
yeah,n i'm feelin much btr..
thnks

JITHU..
thnks for appreciatin my work..
take care

2:50 PM  
Blogger Mirage said...

And that's why I'm so mad at u!! >:[

11:03 PM  
Blogger desperado said...

gud tht the frustation flowed out
let the smile bring tht light

there is a long road ahead buddy...get over tht loneliness

but do keep smiling :)

P.S. Did by any chance you had a hair cut ;)

12:21 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

MIRAGE..
lol

DESPARADO..
yeah i know..
i cut off my hair,MYSELF..
with scissor n sometimes with a knife....look at tht anger..
i'm crazy!!!!

1:25 AM  
Blogger anuj said...

nice poem. lotsa pain.

calm dwn girl. jst chillax & relax.
calm dwn .

3:23 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

ANUJ..
thnks...but it's not as painful as ZINDA's songs,"yeh meri kahani" n "har sans"....lol

6:17 AM  
Blogger The man in the box said...

Hey thanks for the wishes... I like your blog URL. And I see that you've been to Goa recently(?). Awesome place...we went about two years ago and covered all the beaches movin from one to another on bikes!

As for frustration, stay away from it...it annoys!

7:56 AM  
Blogger the Monk said...

yeah, let it all out...tone down the font a little,though, will ya?

10:07 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

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10:25 PM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

THE MONK..
forgot to reply the part on frustration tht u've commented on...
well,i am lettin it out..through poems..it'll only subside,if i keep them alive n kill them with words...

10:26 PM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

THE MONK..
u didn't like the font?
ok
anyways,thnks for droppin by..

THE MAN IN THE BOX..
u know before comin to my blog,i went to ur's to chk if u've replied to my comment...well,ofc there wasn't any,n tht annoyed me so much..but i'm so glad u took some time out to browse through mine...now my annoyance has subsided..lol
goa on bikes...wow!!!infact,tht's the best way of not jst to see goa,but for exploring too...dn't u think so?brilliant..
oh..u like my url.."workingclassheroine"
got it from lennon's song title "working class hero"..my fav!!
only the last word has been changed,cos of the change in gender..lol
frustation can only be out once it strikes u...else u wudn't know anythin at all...poems are the best way of gettin it out...heard of jim morrison..tht's it..
poem is the way of ventin out all tht u have inside...it can be anythin..anythin at all...
thnks for droppin by!!!n keep visitn..btw,u got a gr8 taste in music..got it frm ur profile!!

10:29 PM  
Blogger cherubic_chipmunk said...

whew that was a literary visual n an aural beauty(u kno i read it out aloud coz i 2 was goin thro' som rough moments)...u sure r rockin'...so u too a fan of the lajawaab lennon,eh?hav u read catcher in the rye by ne chance?...
n hey wish u a gr8 year '06 n hope its filled wid happiness evry moment...

6:23 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

thnks for tht high note of appreciation...i'm really delighted with tht kind of response u gave to my poems...
wat more can i ask for...
when things get rough...kill them with words..they help in subsiding it..trust me on this...i did smthin tht i shudn't have done..felt lil awkward,so i let it all out through this poem...

lennon...i'm not his fan or smthin,yeah..but i do listen to him..i'm more inclined n biased twds pearl jam,creed,linkin park n definately..the doors..puddle of mudd have jst got themselves included in my list..lol

i read tht book...but i guess i need to read it again..but i definately dn't wanna end up like mark chapman or some psycho killer..lol
...u have inspired me to write btr..surely u did by readin it aloud!!
take care n have gr8 year ahead!!

12:48 PM  
Blogger The man in the box said...

I've written poems too, but they were usually because I was bored in the class. As for bike riding, nothing could be better if you just had an iPod along. :)

I'm glad u like my taste in music. But the profile is pretty old and now I listen a lot of other bands too. One lazy sunday afternoon, I'll sit and update the whole thing.

6:20 AM  

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