Saturday, January 14, 2006

SMOKE TO THE MOON

UP SHE GOES,
UP SHE GOES!!

SMOKE FROM MY MOUTH,
FLYING TO THE MOON..

UP SHE GOES,
UP SHE GOES!!

STARING AT A WINDOW,
THE CLOCK HAS STRUCK TWO..
BLINK-BLINKING OF THE RED LIGHT,
BEAT-BEATING OF MY HEART..

UP SHE GOES,
UP SHE GOES!!

EYES ARE WONDERING AROUND,
YELLOW,GREEN,BLUE AND WHITE LIGHT..
BUT THE NIGHT IS STRETCHING IT'S ARM,
WITH AN ENDLESS BLACK LIGHT..

UP SHE GOES,
UP SHE GOES!!

BODY IS GETTING WARM,
BUT THE COLD AIR SURROUND..
STARS ARE HIDDEN,
BEHIND THOSE CLOUDS..

UP SHE GOES,
UP SHE GOES!!

SMOKE IS EXHALED AGAIN,
FLYING TO THE MOON ONCE AGAIN..

UP SHE GOES,
UP SHE GOES!!

THE MOON HAS INVITED THE SMOKE,
SHE IS GOING,
SHE IS GOING..

AND SHE HAS GONE,
WAVING ME GOOD BYE!!!

10 Comments:

Blogger Anjalika said...

PUNEET..
uncanny..but thnks for the reply..

12:09 PM  
Blogger Anjalika said...

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12:09 PM  
Blogger radiohead said...

nice poem ones again buddy !!

Up she goes .. but not in vain
Cause from ur mouth it'll rise again !!

and hey were u smoking :D .. hahahaha .

take care .
and best of luk for ur exm ones again .

8:13 PM  
Blogger Anjalika said...

ANUJ..
smokin?....abhey mar wayga...mirage n milo both will kill me,had one drag though..lol

thnks,but i really like those two lines tht u wrote..

"Up she goes ..
but not in vain
Cause from ur mouth
it'll rise again !!"

well rhymed..n good one
thnk u for the best wishes too..

1:05 AM  
Blogger R said...

mirage n milo will kill you? they dont want u smoking? oops.

hey...nice lines, again! aaah i enjoyed reading it!

2:19 AM  
Blogger Ajay said...

Nice poem buddy......
Iteresting blog....
keep posting......

4:06 AM  
Blogger radiohead said...

lolz tum darti ho kya dono se ... :p ...

are megha ne to generalise kiya hua hai .. she says tum hostel main ho to PEETE hi hoge [alcohol] & smoke bhi karte hoge .

drugs ? hehe kaun si .. charas , ganga .. or jst talkin abt some medicine.

writin this m listenin to LP LIVE . gr8 hai. chalo u chillax . and ache se exm do ;) . tc .

9:21 AM  
Blogger Anjalika said...

ROHIT..
i know..i'm ready to get myself laid under the guillotine..
lol

AJAY..
thnks for droppin..
n keep visitin,u'll get to see more..hahaha

ANUJ..
wat?ru tryin to insult me...mirage wud nvr say anythin like tht...dn't create rifts between us...we have been best frnd for the last 4yrs...so,dn't create complications..n i'm not a brat tht i'll go around drinkin n smokin..

9:28 AM  
Blogger Vikas said...

Is it exam time for you? Then I guess smoking(in any form) is allowed. :)

All the best.

6:22 PM  
Blogger Anjalika said...

THE MAN IN THE BOX..
u r one person n the first one,who has actually got my point,n understood wat i wrote in the poem..
thnk u

4:23 AM  

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