Wednesday, December 14, 2005

another me

it's seeping into me,
it's deepening me...

there's emotion,
there's commotion...

love is in the vein,
anger is the desire...

mirror of u in ur face,
as the satisfaction breaks u down..

out on a long drive,
to visit the never visited horizon...

quarrellsome is the blood,
happy is ur heart...

mannas thrown to the hunger,
crystal drops across ur smiling face....

it's seeping into me,
it's deepening me...

u r seeping into me,
ur love has deepened me..........................

13 Comments:

Blogger Jithu said...

a welcome change? :-) nice poem, as usual...

12:59 PM  
Blogger D'yer Mak'er said...

findin neverland is always fascinatin....but hey!...i say let wait carry you for a while...for then ...who knows...maybe neverland finds you....

ps. few answers can never be found....only they can find you...n' you know what?..they will.

4:30 PM  
Blogger Mirage said...

Wow! God nika that was awesome! really gr8 poem! keep up the good work girl!! :) Way 2 go!

2:02 AM  
Blogger milo said...

applause!!! niks it ws beautifully portrayed..tc buddy.

2:06 AM  
Blogger desperado said...

ill borrow words frm other
"nice, awesome, beautfiul"

"love is in the vein,
anger is the desire
mirror of u in ur face,
as the satisfaction breaks u down"

keep them coming....

3:31 AM  
Blogger Rohit Talwar said...

whoa... someone can write well!! :)

9:30 AM  
Blogger cherubic_chipmunk said...

dunno if i've deciphered the msg rightly but i'm tempted to think u're probably obsessed wid sth or sm1...well watever it is the way u've put it is amazing-all i can say is-I'm ur fan!!...keep writing-:-)

10:05 AM  
Blogger Dreamcatcher said...

Hii,
nice poem..seems like its penned down in the throes of some strong emotion..a happy one i hope :).
in response to D'yer Maker's comments on your last post - it is best to ignore what unstable ppl say. kuch bhi bol dete hai..

10:28 AM  
Blogger D'yer Mak'er said...

@dreamcatcher ..

excuse me!!..what was that...

@triplesix

so triplesix...are you gonna listen to dc...soch lo...she's the new one...i was the one who gave you the company always...right from "hello stranger".......you're gonna ignore me kya?...tell it frankly ....i won't express that i was hurt...

11:36 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

@JITHU
thnk u

@DYER MAKER
neverland...shall we leave tht to our imagination?

@mirage
u lvd it n tht made me more hpy...
yes i do have a long way to go...but dn't forget to show me the way...

@MILO..
thnk u so much,milo...thnk u

@DESPARADO..
THESE LINES WILL NO MORE COME 4U....
THEY'LL BE POURED INSTEAD!!!

@ROHIT..
u thnk so?

@CHERUBIC_CHIPMUNK...
thnk u..and u r always welcome to be a fan of my poems....

@DREAMCATCHER..
those emotions..were strong,but only imaginary....and for someone real and not imaginary....
but it's of no use.....so i say,let happiness be ur strong religion...

@DYER MAKER...
(in context to dreamcatcher)
sry...no comments...my selfish motive for coments on my post....lol!!!

4:00 AM  
Blogger D'yer Mak'er said...

@dreamcatcher -->>

dekha...it worked!!!!!

@triplesix -->> ..

hmm..here...take my hand!!(wink!!)you're in my side!!!!

9:58 AM  
Blogger anuj said...

nice poem . keep the gud stop coming. And its nice to see this change .. gud tht ur happy now :)

2:26 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

anuj...
change??
dn't know how far will it lasts...

5:26 AM  

Post a Comment

<< Home