Monday, November 28, 2005

EMPTINESS!!! (a poem)



the sad is saddened,
the happy is tryin.

things are goin fast,
things are at the last.

singin my fav song,
but what took me so long?

memories never to forget,
but emptiness is what u get.

rough times crawlin on u,
strangers brawlin at u.

they are strippin the innocent,
they are mockin the intelligent.

they are strippin the innocent,
they r mockin the intelligent.
emptiness is still what u get..
emptiness and emptiness............................................



THERE ARE TWO MORE POEMS THT I HAVE JOTTED DOWN,WHILE I WAS TRAVELLIN IN THE CAR AND WAS GETTIN IMMENSELY BORED.....
WAT TO DO,I FINISHED MY BOOK, AND DIDN'T HAVE ANY OTHER,AND THERE WAS NO MUSIC SYSTEM IN THE CAR THT MY DAD HAD HIRED FOR HIS SHORT VISIT TO INDIA.
NO SPARE SHEETS TO WRITE ON,NO PEN TO WRITE WITH...
WITH MY FINISHED BOOK IN HAND,AND A PEN LIGHTER OF MY DAD'S HELPED ME PASS MY TIME WITH THE HELP OF MY FAV OBSESSION...POEMS!!!!

HAPPY READIN AND TAKE CARE

13 Comments:

Blogger Rohit Talwar said...

they are really cool lines! keep writing and posting! :)

7:14 AM  
Blogger Random said...

cheer up bunny!

9:49 AM  
Blogger desperado said...

so the poet is back..
good for u n for us :)

nice lines

and yeah ..u keep smilin n take care..
n happy writin ;)

12:46 PM  
Blogger shitij said...

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6:10 PM  
Blogger shitij said...

Really nice poem .......very touching indeed........this is exactly what I am feeling , very nice blog.

6:12 PM  
Blogger Mirage said...

Nice one nika...tho I hope the emptiness in ur life is filled with lots of joy and love...

take care

10:40 PM  
Blogger Sushmit said...

everytime i flip through your blog, i have maiden's song rushing through my head - 666...the number of the beast!

10:32 PM  
Blogger Docs Dope said...

great poem..u have real talent gurl

11:25 PM  
Blogger Jithu said...

though i cudnt see the pics u posted, the poem was nice..

11:34 AM  
Blogger Prasoon said...

so the eventful evening did produce a nice result as visible tho the evening as u tell - was boring..
[u've stayed away from ur comp for long i guess]

7:49 PM  
Blogger anuj said...

hey nice poem dear ..

emptiness is a part of life .. hehe i might be sitting in a room full of friends .. all chatting .. laughin .. giggling .. ubt there emptiness ..somewhere inside .. sometimes weak & sometimes strong .


and hey u had a great time wid ur dad !! nice !! keep smilin :)

4:55 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

@rohit talwar
thnks pal

@rash
u2

@dhruv
good for u and for me?
chalo i mst say thnks,esp to u all,for readin my stuff.

@shitij
thnku,but i realy dn't want tht feelin to erupt in u...try to avoid it,it'll make u feel shit bout everythin around u...trust me on tht...

@mirage
hey megha....i miss u all so much..
thnk u for appreciatin my junk...

emptiness?not sure if its still persistin,but i'm livin it as the day goes by...

@sushmit
"dn't stand...
dn't stand...
dn't stand so close to me..."
hehehehehehe
??????666...the beast

@docs dope
thnk u...
and keep postin ur comment...

docs dope?u treat patient or u instigate on givin them a high?
lol

@jithu
i cudn't see the pics either...
it was a nice one,but shucks,it didn't appear..

@prasoon
yeah i know...
i cn't be regular with my mails...
a lil busy with my father....
take care

@anuj
thnk u..

yeah right...room full of friends...
and here it is room full of thoughts and curosities...hehehehe
hehehehehehe
take care

9:36 PM  
Blogger milo said...

lovely lines...miss u yaar... hp u havin loads of fun

8:08 AM  

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