Thursday, July 26, 2007

"OUR's?"..is stranded in isolation

i wish i knew
what you had come for;
i wish i knew
what i wanted the most.

things are not fitting,
words are not yet settled.

there's fire between us,
but it remains cold.
there's breeze around us,
alas, my skin is all dried up.

you complain,
"the place is too lonely!"
and i brag about it being,
"too overcrowded."

there's no sugar in your coffee,
and i'd wished for many more.


i wish i knew
what you would come for.
i wish i knew
what Exactly i wanted the most.

10 Comments:

Blogger desperado said...

wow...u r back wid a passionate piece :)
we all wish we knew what exactly we wanted the most

2:58 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

@desparado...
thnk u...
yeah,it's a passionate piece,but the truth is...it's sad..
something tht has failed,n i can't decide as to how to respond to it without technically claiming for its fiasco...
tht's it...i dn't even know y i'm writting all this here..supposed to be personal...
anyhow,now i'm pretty much ambivalent about it...so it's fine..

11:24 AM  
Blogger Mirage said...

hmmmm...cool hai! I knw exactly who ur referring to tho...

Chill honey, just give it time.

9:06 AM  
Blogger anuj said...

this gives me cravings .. more n more .. cravings ..

10:52 AM  
Blogger relations said...

hey..

nice issue puuled up..
but if we know thing..would life be so funny..
ignorance is indeed a bliss..

1:49 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

@mirage..
sure..

@anuj...
ok...now,tht's a bit scary..cravings are alright,but too much can be dangerous..lol


@relations..
thnks for the comment

i wouldn't say tht the bliss would be considered at all times,esp not with someone who has encountered or witnessed a situation not worth ignoring...so no bliss,pal!

anyhow,it's ur opinion and u r entitle to it,but dn't presume blindly..

11:46 AM  
Blogger relations said...

okies..
no argues..

9:57 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

@relations..
it wasn't an argument..

it was....just a reply..a reply that justifies without "disembarking" ur opinion..

so..chill n cheers!

10:09 AM  
Blogger Divinity said...

Hey well..a lovely piece...
Time for advice: Give ur thing time...if it doesn owrk out talk iti out..or abandon it...u guys shud know which one of them are better...
Good luck to you. hope you find ur way out

3:26 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

divinity...

no use....i have sulked enough over tht idiot...now it's gone...though we have patched up,but i'll never repeat tht same thing with him...

12:16 PM  

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