Wednesday, May 10, 2006

flower that reeked


my! oh my,
dn't get me so high,
for they wn't fly.
and the tears that i cry,
will run dry..
my! oh my..............

love ain't so far,
but these hands are small.
talking dsn't help,
and the solutions melt..

the moon is above my head,
but i can feel the sweat.
the sun is scorching,
and the heart freeze up..

drinks are stalked,
books in hand,
eyeing the collection,
all ears to music..

amplified,
everything is amplifying,
bit by bit..
little by little..

reeked perfume,
stained flower.
people with salt in hand,
will sprinkle at any open wound...

faces are mask,
anger and despair!!
everywhere,
it's everywhere!!!

people talk,
love and despise!!
pointless,
it's pointless!!!

it's nothing,
yet we r celebrating............

it's fleeting,
to another beginning....

my! oh my,
dn't get me so high,
for they wn't fly.
and the tears that i cry,
will just run dry....
my! oh my...

MY! OH MY..............

19 Comments:

Blogger Mirage said...

Its awesome nika! I loved it the first time u read it out to me. N the sketch goes pretty well wid it too! I gotta say...my oh my!! ;)

Hey take care k?

1:08 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

MIRAGE..
thnk u...
u r my loyal analyst for my post..

toast to u..one problem
if u dn't mind,can u lend me some authority to drink.....plez

5:14 AM  
Blogger Rohit Talwar said...

Lovely lines. Seriously.

And hey, even I want to drink...it's been so long :(

5:19 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

ROHIT..
u live in delhi,na...
then let's have some.....

watsay?

upto u..lol

9:19 AM  
Blogger Arz000n said...

So ma insane poem writer is back to her poetry mood....awesome :)

Nice poem yet again Anjalika!!

and the sketch put is awesome..just awesome....

12:33 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

ARZ000N....
with all my pleasure n insanity...

1:14 AM  
Blogger milo said...

wo wo... nice sketch wid oh my my feelings of urs!!

11:30 AM  
Blogger desperado said...

nice free flowing words
but the best part is d sketch...rocking..grt work

5:41 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

MILO..
thnks

DESPARADO..
a note of appreciation..thnk u for tht,but i'll have to dissapoint u for a moment..i didn't make tht sketch...lol

5:49 AM  
Blogger anuj said...

u drunk ??

jst tc .

11:53 PM  
Blogger anuj said...

great sketch .

12:04 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

ANUJ...
thnks...

sloshed or stoned???
hmmmm...............

wat do u think?
now keep thinkin...lol

8:40 AM  
Blogger Mr. Maverick said...

Is this a poetry season? Wherever i go i see poetry....

I think I should also write one, at least that will end the season ;-)

12:27 PM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

MAVERICK...
there's nthin called season in poetry...

whenever u feel like expressin,poetry comes in hand...n it's btr off lettin the words flow than to hold in...

n about u writtin a poetry,tht's upto u...but it will nvr cm to an end with ur writtin...

cos u cn't conclude it,but urself..

1:33 PM  
Blogger Rohit Talwar said...

GREAT IDEA!

Whenever. :D

3:55 AM  
Blogger Mirage said...

UPDATE!! You knw i'm rid of the iimc entrance...so i need you to update woman!!

8:03 AM  
Blogger transience said...

i read that in a singsong way. perfect.

1:07 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

MIRAGE...
i did...n i know u will not only like it,but will be able to read between the lines...

1:21 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

TRANSIENCE..
long time...good to have u around..

u liked it??

i'm glad u did..

:)

1:22 AM  

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