flower that reeked
my! oh my,
dn't get me so high,
for they wn't fly.
and the tears that i cry,
will run dry..
my! oh my..............
love ain't so far,
but these hands are small.
talking dsn't help,
and the solutions melt..
the moon is above my head,
but i can feel the sweat.
the sun is scorching,
and the heart freeze up..
drinks are stalked,
books in hand,
eyeing the collection,
all ears to music..
amplified,
everything is amplifying,
bit by bit..
little by little..
reeked perfume,
stained flower.
people with salt in hand,
will sprinkle at any open wound...
faces are mask,
anger and despair!!
everywhere,
it's everywhere!!!
people talk,
love and despise!!
pointless,
it's pointless!!!
it's nothing,
yet we r celebrating............
it's fleeting,
to another beginning....
my! oh my,
dn't get me so high,
for they wn't fly.
and the tears that i cry,
will just run dry....
my! oh my...
MY! OH MY..............
19 Comments:
Its awesome nika! I loved it the first time u read it out to me. N the sketch goes pretty well wid it too! I gotta say...my oh my!! ;)
Hey take care k?
MIRAGE..
thnk u...
u r my loyal analyst for my post..
toast to u..one problem
if u dn't mind,can u lend me some authority to drink.....plez
Lovely lines. Seriously.
And hey, even I want to drink...it's been so long :(
ROHIT..
u live in delhi,na...
then let's have some.....
watsay?
upto u..lol
So ma insane poem writer is back to her poetry mood....awesome :)
Nice poem yet again Anjalika!!
and the sketch put is awesome..just awesome....
ARZ000N....
with all my pleasure n insanity...
wo wo... nice sketch wid oh my my feelings of urs!!
nice free flowing words
but the best part is d sketch...rocking..grt work
MILO..
thnks
DESPARADO..
a note of appreciation..thnk u for tht,but i'll have to dissapoint u for a moment..i didn't make tht sketch...lol
u drunk ??
jst tc .
great sketch .
ANUJ...
thnks...
sloshed or stoned???
hmmmm...............
wat do u think?
now keep thinkin...lol
Is this a poetry season? Wherever i go i see poetry....
I think I should also write one, at least that will end the season ;-)
MAVERICK...
there's nthin called season in poetry...
whenever u feel like expressin,poetry comes in hand...n it's btr off lettin the words flow than to hold in...
n about u writtin a poetry,tht's upto u...but it will nvr cm to an end with ur writtin...
cos u cn't conclude it,but urself..
GREAT IDEA!
Whenever. :D
UPDATE!! You knw i'm rid of the iimc entrance...so i need you to update woman!!
i read that in a singsong way. perfect.
MIRAGE...
i did...n i know u will not only like it,but will be able to read between the lines...
TRANSIENCE..
long time...good to have u around..
u liked it??
i'm glad u did..
:)
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