Tuesday, May 01, 2007

the ambit of inhumanity

i dn't want to go in details as to what the poem signify...i think it can easily be understood....in short,if i have to say something...it's the reprucussion to what the man is facing after he himself has opened the "pandora box" for his greed...n now see what the world has turned into because of him.....here "world" is india after all the riots and crime under the name of religion and the govt's role in it...and other ill deeds,not neccessarily related to riots...




glory!!......whorey!!
this country wants to maintain
it's Holy...

don't buy me that,
i'm in debts.
i take the rest,
and pay it with gradual death.

whom do we succumb to
for our misfortunes,
wasn't there anyone else to lavish us
with pretentious attention?

life around us swallowed;
and a book of melancholy preambles
by the school of dancing devils
go on fluttering in a man's disguise.

authorities in cavity
boorish and lot of muck.
no escape, no surrender
just fight with dishonesty.

glory!!...whorey!!
the country still maintains
it's Holy!!!!!!!

19 Comments:

Blogger desperado said...

well the new place looks like has suited the writer u :D

"no escape, no surrender
just fight with dishonesty."
.....just thinking whether they convey fight against dishonesty or fighting with dishonesty in tow ..u see end sem exams make me use my normally dormant little mind :P

11:12 AM  
Blogger Mirage said...

Hmm...so this is the Parzania effect!

Well written ya...this world is nothin but a bunch of morons waitin to pounce on the slightest 'mistake' u do...

9:53 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

@desparado..
lol....all the best for ur sem...

the dishonesty part...it's the latter part...

@megha...
thnks yaar...it has given me a relief...

9:32 PM  
Blogger Prmod Bafna said...

Wow nice to heat from you again in such a profound and 'new light' manner!! :)

7:55 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

@prmod...
thnk u...
"new light" with a dark poem!!lol

8:12 AM  
Blogger MS said...

life really swallows

2:03 PM  
Blogger Mahdi said...

the poem is really nice, very critical but I dont really c the point of the first, as far as far the poem is concerned it should be up to the reader to to interpret it, I dont really like the first part

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1:09 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

@MS...
"swallows"...i like the song as well,the one by Bush
"swallowed"

@mahdi..
i'm glad criticisms havn't ceased to exsist...n i respect ur's too...

as far as interpretation is concerned...well tht's ur opinion....not everyone wants to interpret...they read too...just for fun,sans understanding...lol

isn't tht a big time "ignorance" landing?

7:37 AM  
Blogger desperado said...

where r u????

10:31 PM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

@desparado...

i have ceased to exsist!!!!

kiddin,i'm in mumbai...dn't have internet connection at home....

take care

7:47 AM  
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8:08 PM  
Blogger desperado said...

well one frnd comes back frm mumbai..den d oder goes...gud :D
tk cr

9:28 PM  
Blogger Naresh said...

heyyy... long time... how r u???

2:34 AM  
Blogger Prmod Bafna said...

Oyeeee! Bless us with the mumbai madness in your head! or even otherwise.. update!! ;)

5:46 AM  

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