Monday, May 22, 2006

wonderland


the night was awake,
morning was the wonderland,
had nothing,
but some laughs..

sprinkled silver and envy's Colour,
drained into my blood,
and my eyes were all red,
and so i laughed and laughed..

evening came,
still self infused.
with friend at a friend's,
ectasy welcomed me..

one more dose,
sprinkled silver and envy's Colour,
draining into my blood,
making my eyes go red again..

people came over,
not one turned.
all were silent,
but one stroked me down..

i had my dose again,
sprinkled silver and envy's Colour,
drain into my blood,
but the eyes are lifeless..

the song yelled in me,
but i saw a dream.
my hands swam across the hair,
and those eyes starved me..

back home,
still untouched.
wouldn't let it down,
till i let myself flow through it..

give me more,
sprinkled silver and envy's Colour,
let it drain into my blood,
and let my eyes laugh...........................

22 Comments:

Blogger desperado said...

Now here I go again, I see the crystal visions
I keep my visions to myself
Its only me
Who wants to wrap around your dreams and...
Have you any dreams youd like to sell?
Dreams of loneliness...
Like a heartbeat... drives you mad...
In the stillness of remembering what you had...
And what you lost...
And what you had...
And what you lost

Thunder only happens when its raining
Players only love you when theyre playing
Say... women... they will come and they will go
When the rain washes you clean... youll know


song called Dreams by Fleetwood Mac...currently on my playlist..dont know how it associates with ur thoughts but I felt it did...what tht im not sure of :)

all i say give me more of such words
take care

6:06 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

DESPARADO...

it's a nice song,i've heard it too..

9:24 AM  
Blogger Trivial said...

Impressed in an understatement, Intrigued gets closer!! its sad that the mystery dies when explored maybe thats why there aint many a poets, its hard to understand life and still live it.. maybe.

Keep penning you just loose the ink, alas the reader looses his peace, for a while and then moves on.

10:30 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

FAKHRU...
hey,it's nice to have another new person commentin...but alas,i havn't much understood wat u r tryin to convey through ur comment...

1:31 PM  
Blogger Trivial said...

Aha I was trying to complicate the appreciation lol :)

11:04 PM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

FAKHRU..
well,yes u succeeded in doin so!!!

hahaha

4:07 AM  
Blogger Arz000n said...

I came back from GOA yesterday

Wooo...Hooo!!

Just remembered your post about goa trip coupla months back :)

9:47 AM  
Blogger Mirage said...

Ahem ahem! Somebody's been to wonderland...and back! ;)

11:39 PM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

ARZ000N..
good!!!
smthin reminded u of me..

lol

MIRAGE..
"now i'm flyin to the moon and back, if u plez..if u be my bby"..

wonderland!!!!!!!!!!!

11:41 PM  
Blogger Miz BoheMia said...

Naughty girl! What have you been up to?

I like your place and that pic is just fab!

I finally made it over and forgive the delay but life and lil' bohemians tend to happen! Hope all is well chica and have a great weekend!

11:50 PM  
Blogger Rohit Talwar said...

WONDERLAND! Ahem, how was the lines?! :D


wouldn't let it down,
till i let myself flow through it..

Any particular references?

11:11 AM  
Blogger Prmod Bafna said...

Hey!! howz you been?!? very beautifully written and i love the picture too..!! But i cant help wondering if there was more to the post than being just another random write..! But very nicely done nonetheless. Cheers!! :)

1:36 AM  
Blogger anup.777 said...

i must be having an off-day ... i'm having a one-track mind ... so pls don't misunderstand when i ask - are u doing drugs? ... lolz ... just kidding yaar ... (coz' u talk about silver getting into ur blood and then escatsy, the designer drug?) .... :)

1:21 AM  
Blogger anuj said...

* gulps hard *

errr .. nt d silver .. jst a normal gulp ..

wonderland ..
dear ALICE .. wonderland is gr8 .. bt wht whn d sun comes out nxt morning .. so boozing may be jst a small run .. bt its a marathon .. in d end u hav to sweat & run hard .. on urselves .. wid no liquid drained in ur blood.

umm .. probably get ur worries drunk .. thy will slip in to som gutter .. hehe

Take care.
anuj.

12:37 PM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

MIZ..
oh...u finally made it..

it's good to have u around..

ROHIT..
i leave it to ur imagination..

ANUP..
drugs???not really,but the greens can do wonder..

ANUJ..
if it so,then be it so..n we shall welcome the mornin with arems wide open n close it with our desire...

2:00 AM  
Blogger anuj said...

hmmm ... gud spirit !!

tc.

4:26 AM  
Blogger Prmod Bafna said...

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5:31 AM  
Blogger camera shy said...

3:6

great stuff

did you take the photo?

2:30 PM  
Blogger Raghav said...

sounds like quite a party !
anyway reminded me of 'the basketball diaries'
and u better lay low the cops are looking for snorters !!

4:48 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

RAGHAV..
oh..tht film with caprio in it?

i have seen tht one too,read the book too....quite sad with a happy ending...hahahahahaha

cops?i ain't scared of them..u know y...i'm bored of it...cos tht's wat they do...scare u!!

CAMERA SHY..
thnks...no i didn't click it...

wat 3:6?

ANUJ...
hmmm...
:)

PRMOD BAFNA..
god damn u prmod....i swear 'm gnna kill ya....tht's an oath....

lol

7:46 AM  
Blogger Rohit Talwar said...

Uhm..

UPDATE, PLEASE!

12:54 PM  
Blogger Prmod Bafna said...

Wonderland must be fascinating..! Update us oh! uninteruptress :D

7:29 AM  

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