Thursday, February 07, 2008

the road

alone he walks,
on the new road.
he swings his hand,
and taps himself.

dim-street lights,
the mosquitoes bite
and the barking dogs.

he is thinking
what the road can hold,
but the distance can't.....

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9 Comments:

Blogger mayz said...

triplesix...d devil???
ur posts certainly dont show any of those traits!!!!

3:35 AM  
Blogger desperado said...

Have no fear
For when I'm alone
I'll be better off than I was before

I'll take this soul that's inside me now
Like a brand new friend
I'll forever know

I've got this light
And the will to show
I will always be better than before

Long nights allow me to feel...
I'm falling...I am falling
The lights go out
Let me feel
I'm falling
I am falling safely to the ground

8:49 PM  
Blogger -Poison- said...

he keeps walking down the road. in anticipation of what it holds; the distance turned to nothing as he cut through it like a race car on rails. (uh oh..i am not a poet!) :)

11:19 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

@mayz...
hmmm...tht's how it is...

@desparado...
is tht ur's?

@poison...
they r good...

my stuff is more towards optimism within the struggle..as in,the man here is strugglin to be somewhere..to reach somewhere...in between u have incidents n people who would do anythin to stop u from goin ahead..the zingers and the uninvited critics...there's jealousy and there's lack of support....but he moves,not knowing what the future holds for him,but he believes in the present,and that is what he is enjoying every bit of it...bad or good,it's a an adventorous and a learnin experience...

7:22 AM  
Blogger -Poison- said...

thats what we ve to do.... move on. move on. wherever u r...

11:30 AM  
Blogger desperado said...

nope not at all mine...an OST from the movie Into the Wild..sung by Eddie Vedder

4:48 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

@desparado...
oh,yeah...silly me,i have the soundtrack too...no wonder i asked u whether it was ur's or not?

i really eddie...pearl jam is my all time fav...

9:31 AM  
Blogger ~Amod~ said...

Looks like you wrote this for me :D, So true for me, and so well written!

11:54 PM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

@amod...
well...ok....i'm glad u liked it...

i wrote this when i was feelin a lil let down due to professional n personal circumstances,n suddenly i see this stranger walkin on the lonely road all alone at 1am....n i quite liked what i saw n things just crept into brain n then on the paper,n now it's here...

5:56 AM  

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